Analytical Exposition

Purpose : to persuade head teacher by presenting arguments
to analyze or explain ‘how’ and ‘why’
Text Organization : A thesis
Arguments
Reiteration or Conclusion
Language Features : Emotive words (e.g. worried, alarmed etc)
Words that qualify statements (e.g. usual, Probably etc)
Words that link arguments (e.g. firstly, However, therefore etc)

Sources:
Cahyono, Kristiawan Dwi and Eka Purnama.2006. Communicative Competence 2B: A course in Acquiring English Communicative Competence, For Senior High School Level, Grade XI Semester 2. Jombang: CV Karunia Agung



Sudarwati and Eudia Grace.2007. Look Ahead: An English Course for Senior High School Students Year XI, Science and Social Study Program. Jakarta: Erlangga

Should students be allowed to use mobile phones in school?

I think children’s should'nt use their phones on school because most students text or call their parents to go home. I should know this because I am a senior high student in Denpasar and everyday i see more and more student’s getting their phones taking away. If you need to use your phone for an emergency you should ask the teacher to use the mobile phone. The only time students should use their mobile-phones is when their calling their parents after school to pick them up. As a student I do have a mobile phone and i love to text but once you get used to it your mind goes towards your phone and not to class. Even if its P.E. ive seen kids getting their phone taken away because their calling their parents to pick them up. If you are actually sick or not feeling well thats when you should go to the office and tell them. Everytime I see one of my friends testing during class I tell them to stop but they end up getting mad so I just let them get caught. I dont really care for phones that much. Im not a straight A student but i feel that the use of mobile-phones are'nt that important. For instance, if your a parent you know you didnt have a phone, so the thing you should do for your child is sign up with a phone company that can help you sign up for a child navigator. It may not seem fair to most kids without the use of a mobile-phone but thats one thing that can help you.